HOMEWORK: Do you think young children should be allowed to watch horror movies?
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I think young children between the ages of 4 and 7 shouldn\\\'t be allowed to watch horror movies.
Because they can\\\'t sleep if they watch horror movies.
But I think elementary school students between the ages of 8 and 13 should be able to choose whether they see it or not.
강사 첨삭
Hello Julia! :)
Because they can\\\'t sleep if they watch horror movies.
But I think elementary school students between the ages of 8 and 13 should be able to choose whether they see it or not.
Thank you so much for answering your homework.
Have a wonderful day. :)
- Tricia
I think young children between the ages of 4 and 7 shouldn\\\'t be allowed to watch horror movies.
>> I think young children between the ages of 4 to 7 shouldn\'t be allowed to watch horror movies.
Because they can\\\'t sleep if they watch horror movies.
>> Because they won\'t be able to sleep well if they watch horror movies.
But I think elementary school students between the ages of 8 and 13 should be able to choose whether they see it or not.
>> But I think elementary school students between the ages of 8 to 13 can already decide whether they want to watch horror movies or not.
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