Homework : Does the weather affect your mood?

Hi Allen!

Wow! Two compositions in one day.

You\'re on a roll!

Just keep them coming.

I\'ll be happy to read them all.

I hope my suggestions help.

See you in class.^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

It is not difficult to see that people\'s feelings are affected by the weather.

>> Correct
For example, in the rainy days, some people want to listen to classical music and ballad songs.

>> For example, on rainy days, some people want to listen to classical music and ballad songs.
In this essay, I will talk about my ideas and explain my experiences.

>> Correct! (You really got the hang of this!^^)
There are several reasons why I think that the weather affects my mood.

>> Correct
One of them is my experience that I usually feel many different moods through the weather.

>> One of them is the fact that my mood usually changes with the weather.
For instance, when I\'m in the sunny day having clear blue sky, I mostly feel happy and great.

>> For instance, when it\'s a sunny day and we have clear, blue skies, I feel happy and great.
Furthermore, It also generates the desire that I want to go outside.

>> Furthermore, it also generates the desire to go outside.
So, I\'d like to breath in the clear blue sky.

>> I\'d like to breathe in the clear blue sky. 
People also are affected by that like me.

>> I believe other people are affected the same way.
I hope that these moods that are affected by the weather lead to improve our life.

>> I hope that our mood depending on the weather can help us improve our lives.