homework : essay
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I think the biggest reason why people celebrate Thanksgiving Day is that the culture of the agrarian era was passed down. In the past, most people engaged in agriculture. Autumn was the time of harvesting the crops they have grown. So, they celebrated the success of harvest. Also, When Thanksgiving Day come, people can take a rest for a while and prepare for the winter. Spring and summer were the passionate time. So, people prefer to cool down during the holidays.
There are three things that people are thankful for. First, they are thankful for their family, friend or someone who always love and support them. Secondly, they appreciate for the long holidays. They can take enough rest during the Thanksgiving Day. Lastly, they can be thankful for delicious food which is specially prepared for them. Those things make people happy and enjoy the holiday!
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>>> TEACHER GEMMA
I think the biggest reason why people celebrate Thanksgiving Day is that the culture of the agrarian era was passed down.
>>> CORRECT
In the past, most people engaged in agriculture.
>>> CORRECT
Autumn was the time of harvesting the crops they have grown.
>>> CORRECT
So, they celebrated the success of harvest.
>>> CORRECT
Also, When Thanksgiving Day come, people can take a rest for a while and prepare for the winter.
>>> Also, when Thanksgiving Day comes, people can take a rest for a while and prepare for the winter.
Spring and summer were the passionate time.
>>> CORRECT
So, people prefer to cool down during the holidays.
>>> CORRECT
There are three things that people are thankful for.
>>> CORRECT
There are three things that people are thankful for.
>>> CORRECT
First, they are thankful for their family, friend or someone who always love and support them.
>>> CORRECT
Secondly, they appreciate the long holidays.
>>> CORRECT
They can take enough rest during the Thanksgiving Day.
>>> CORRECT
Lastly, they can be thankful for delicious food which is specially prepared for them.
>>> CORRECT
Those things make people happy and enjoy the holiday!
>>> CORRECT
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