homework : essay
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My healthy eating habit is eating fruits and vegetables every day. I try to eat salad and drink a fresh juice so I can get vitamins and release toxins from my body. It is not only good for our heath but also our skin! If you want to have clean skin, try to eat a lot of fruits and vegetables. I think this habit is more effective than using expensive skin care cosmetics.
However, I have a bad eating habit too. First, I like junk food. I’m used to the junk foods’ stimulating taste. So, I can’t easily quit them although I know that those foods are not good for me. Secondly, I really love spicy food! I think most Korean women like it and I am one of them. In Korea, there are so many kinds of spicy food. Doctors advised that spicy food is dangerous for our stomach, but I ignored it. Lastly, I enjoy eating too much carbohydrate. I love rice, breads, and noodles. For those reasons, I gained weight.
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Homework : Essay
My healthy eating habit is eating fruits and vegetables every day. >>My healthy eating habit includes eating fruits and vegetables every day.
I try to eat salad and drink a fresh juice so I can get vitamins and release toxins from my body.
>>I try to eat salad and drink a glass of fresh juice, so I can get vitamins in order to help me release toxins from my body.
It is not only good for our heath but also our skin!
>>It is not only good for our heath, but also for our skin!
If you want to have clean skin, try to eat a lot of fruits and vegetables.
>>If you want to have a clear skin, try to eat a lot of fruits and vegetables.
I think this habit is more effective than using expensive skin care cosmetics.
CORRECT!
or>>In my opinion, this particular habit is much more effective than using expensive skin care products.
However, I have a bad eating habit too.
However, I have a bad eating habit too.
CORRECT!
or>>Although, I also practice some bad eating habits.
First, I like junk food. I’m used to the junk foods’ stimulating taste.
>>First, I like junk foods. I’m used to it\'s addictive taste.
So, I can’t easily quit them although I know that those foods are not good for me.
>>So, I can’t easily quit from eating them. Although, I know that these foods are not good for me.
Secondly, I really love spicy food!
CORRECT!
or>>Secondly, I love eating spicy foods!
I think most Korean women like it and I am one of them.
CORRECT!
or>>I think that most Korean women are addicted to these foods and I am also included as one of them.
In Korea, there are so many kinds of spicy food.
CORRECT!
or>>In Korea, we have a lot of spicy foods.
Doctors advised that spicy food is dangerous for our stomach, but I ignored it.
>>Doctors advised that spicy foods are dangerous for our stomach, but I ignored it.
Lastly, I enjoy eating too much carbohydrate.
>>Lastly, I enjoy eating too much carbohydrates.
I love rice, breads and noodles.
CORRECT!
or>>I love munching on rice, breads and noodles.
For those reasons, I gained weight.
CORRECT!
or>>Because of these reasons, I added some extra pounds.
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