Homework : essay
학생이 쓴 원문
I think enough photoshop can build confidence in persons’ apperance. In Korea, people usually use photoshop application to make their selfies more pretty and handsome. If its’ not much different from the real, people accept and understand it. Actually I love to manipulate my selfies because it’s really fun.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, [이름]. And a happy Friday to you as well. I appreciate your honest opinion on this topic. People have the liberty to manipulate their pictures and up to their own standards. I guess it matters when it is acceptable and realistic to society. :) Have a great weekend. See you on Monday. ~Teacher Jane c\",)
I think enough photoshop can build confidence in persons’ appearance.
>> I think using enough photoshop features can build confidence in a person\'s appearance.
In Korea, people usually use photoshop application to make their selfies more pretty and handsome.
>> In Korea, people usually use photoshop applications to make their selfies prettier or more handsome.
If its’ not much different from the real, people accept and understand it.
>> It is acceptable if it is not much different from the real photo.
Actually I love to manipulate my selfies because it’s really fun.
>> Actually, I love to manipulate my selfies because it is really fun.
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