Homework : essay
학생이 쓴 원문
I feel proud when I finish exercising. Actually It is really hard for me to make up my mind to start exercising. But once I try, I concentrate on it and finally I can achieve. Recently I started running, and every time I finish the course I feel satisfied. I think It is good for our health but also for our mental and emotions.
강사 첨삭
Happy Friday Ms. [이름]!
Thank you for sending me your homework.
And I definitely agree with you that exercising is super satisfying after :)
Enjoy the weekend!!!
I feel proud when I finish exercising.
>>> CORRECT!
Actually It is really hard for me to make up my mind to start exercising.
>>> Actually, it\'s really hard to decide to start exercising.
But once I try, I concentrate on it and finally I can achieve.
>>> But once you try, you can concentrate and finally achieve it.
Recently I started running, and every time I finish the course I feel satisfied.
>>> CORRECT!
OR: I started running recently, and I feel satisfied every time I finish the course.
I think It is good for our health but also for our mental and emotions.
>>> I think it is good for our health and for our mental and emotional feelings.
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