Homework Essay(12/27)
학생이 쓴 원문
[Topic: Describe something you could never give away]
The most thing that I never give away is my family. As I think, family is my foundation in my social field like friend, co-work and any other one. Sometimes when I faced on a big trouble, family to be my teacher and advisor. And if I feel like give up something family to be a my big fan and make me cheer up. Above all when I exhauseted family help me to get rid of stress by ready for comfortable place. So family is the best precious thing than any other one as I think. In other words, it is someting for me to never give away.
강사 첨삭
[Topic: Describe something you could never give away]
The most thing that I never give away is my family. As I think, family is my foundation in my social field like friend, co-work and any other one. Sometimes when I faced on a big trouble, family to be my teacher and advisor. And if I feel like give up something family to be a my big fan and make me cheer up. Above all when I exhauseted family help me to get rid of stress by ready for comfortable place. So family is the best precious thing than any other one as I think. In other words, it is someting for me to never give away.
One thing I can never give away is my family. For me, my family is my foundation in the society, like my friends, co-workers, and many more. Sometimes when I am facing a big problem, my family is my best teacher and adviser. Whenever I feel like giving up on something, my family becomes my biggest fan and cheers me up. Above all, when I am exhausted, my family helps me get rid of stress by making me comfortable. So in conclusion, my family is the most precious thing than anything else. In other words, it is something that I would never give away.
The most thing that I never give away is my family. As I think, family is my foundation in my social field like friend, co-work and any other one. Sometimes when I faced on a big trouble, family to be my teacher and advisor. And if I feel like give up something family to be a my big fan and make me cheer up. Above all when I exhauseted family help me to get rid of stress by ready for comfortable place. So family is the best precious thing than any other one as I think. In other words, it is someting for me to never give away.
[Topic: Describe something you could never give away]
One thing I can never give away is my family. For me, my family is my foundation in the society, like my friends, co-workers, and many more. Sometimes when I am facing a big problem, my family is my best teacher and adviser. Whenever I feel like giving up on something, my family becomes my biggest fan and cheers me up. Above all, when I am exhausted, my family helps me get rid of stress by making me comfortable. So in conclusion, my family is the most precious thing than anything else. In other words, it is something that I would never give away.
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