Homework Essay

Hi, Yeong^^

Thank you so much for doing your home work :)
I really appreciate that you made an effort to answer this questions

Anyways this is your corrections.

>>What would you change about your life if you could?

1. I want to change my eyesight better than now and I want to more grow up.

>> If I only could go back in time I want to take care my eyes because right now my eyesight is not really good. If I will give a chance to do it, I will take care my

eyes more so that it will be better right now and I want to be taller more
When I was young 8-9age. My fater bought Pentium 1 computer. At that time I didn\'t know of out, One day my father\'s bought game CD which the name of virtua Fighter .

>> When I was young about eight or nine years old. My father brought a Pentium 1 computer. At that time I didn\'t know what is that and I don\'t know how to use it.

One day my father brought a CD game called Virtual Fighter 1.

I was fall in love that Gam. I really played  alot of game. One day I realixed falling of my eyesight. Eventually I went to eye clinic with my mother. So I\'m still

wearing glasses.

>>I fell in love with that game. I always play a lot and one day I didn\'t realized that my eyesight is getting blurry because of playing a game. And then I went to an eye clinic with my mother and they found out that I need to wear an eyeglasses already.

I\'m really love activity such as soccer,basketball,running and swimming but I couldn\'t a lot that activity. I was often broken my glasses.When I did acticity hard by occer and etc so I was really careful.

>>> I really love doing activities such as playing soccer, basketball, do running and swimming, but I couldn\'t do that a lot because every time that I will do those ctivities I always broke my eyeglasses. So I need to be more careful about playing those activities next time.

I\'ve had habit due to  computer game. When I was 13 to 19 years old. At that time I really ate a lot and played soccer and basketball but I didn\'t eat meal in the

morning and I usually slep late or all night to playing game. I think that\'s why I didn\'t grow up more.

>> I had a habit of playing computer games when I was 13 years old until 19 years old at those times I really ate a lot of foods and played soccer and basketball, but

I will not eat my breakfast and I usually sleep late or I will be playing online games all night. I think that\'s the reason why I didn\'t grow up more.
I hope more and grow up around 185 cm.
>>  I am hoping that I could grow  up very tall like around 185 cm.

 >>What\'s the best thing that happened to you recently?

2. The best thing is looking for myself. The Last year 2017. Last year I was really hard for me about my mind, feeling and even if I didn\'t have my purpose or goal in my

life so I wasted my time . SOmeday I don\'t want to chanme all of my life. I want to make it positive thinking, feeling mind everything.

>>> The best thing that happened to me recently was last year, which is about myself. Last year I was really confused about my mind, feelings and even my purpose to

achieve my goal is really not good. Sometimes I wasted my time without doing anything, But I don\'t want to keep this negativity that I have, I want to change myself to

be a better person, I also want to think positively, I want to be sure about my feelings and etc.

The first I wrote diary and watched about \"How to thing good positive think, How to make successful in my life and The secret on the youtube. This is really successful

for me.Eventually I changed my mind feeling and thinking. These day I try to always thinking positve and law of attraction.

>>> The first thing I wrote in my diary is about How to think positively and how to be successful in life. I watched those tips on YouTube to know how will I achieve

my goals and dreams in the future. After I watched those trips it made me think that I can be successful in the future. These days I realized that I should be more

positive and more energetic so that I can do whatever I want to do in the future.