Homework: (Essay) Are cooking shows popular in your country? Do you watch any cooking shows?
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There may be cooking shows, but I don\'t know.
But I think there is a genre of food as well as a genre of songs.It is great to have various shapes and tastes with one food.
Moreover, the chef has more men than women and the food is good.
They often appear on TV too.
I also watch their recipes and cook occasionally.
they make food and I buy it online shopping malls.
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>>CORRECT!
But I think there is a genre of food as well as a genre of songs. It is great to have various shapes and tastes with one food.
But I think there is a genre of food as well as a genre of songs. It is great to have various shapes and tastes with one food.
>>But I think there are types of food as well as genres of songs. It is great to have various shapes and tastes with one\'s food choices.
Moreover, the chef has more men than women and the food is good.
Moreover, the chef has more men than women and the food is good.
>>Moreover, there are more men, who are chefs, than women and the food is good.
They often appear on TV too.
They often appear on TV too.
>>CORRECT!
I also watch their recipes and cook occasionally.
I also watch their recipes and cook occasionally.
>>I also read their recipes and watch how they cook occasionally.
they make food and I buy it online shopping malls.
they make food and I buy it online shopping malls.
>>When they make food, I buy it online or from shopping malls.
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