Homework: (Essay) Did you like studying history at school?
학생이 쓴 원문
I was not interested in studying history.
It\'s hard to remember because I haven\'t been through it and I forgot it easily.
As I grew older, what I went through became a history story
It is memorable. For example, the death of the president and the occurrence of big events
I will not forget the world history and my country including who know the world known.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss. [Name]! People always say that the history is boring but I think it is still important because it teaches us some lessons. Have a great day!~~T.Dee
I was not interested in studying history.
>>CORRECT!
It\'s hard to remember because I haven\'t been through it and I forgot it easily.
>>It\'s hard to remember because I haven\'t been through it and I forget it easily.
As I grew older, what I went through became a history story
>>As I grew older, what I experienced had been part of history.
It is memorable. For example, the death of the president and the occurrence of big events
>>It is memorable. For example, the death of the president and the occurrence of big events.
I will not forget the world history and my country including who know the world known.
>>I will not forget the world history and my country\'s history including those who made the discoveries.
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