Homework: (Essay) Do you ever worry about your own mental health?
학생이 쓴 원문
I am 68 years old.
I always thought it was healthy, but I\'m worried about mental health as I get older.Especially should not suffer from dementia.
If I am not mental healthy than sick, you should worry about my family.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss. [Name]! At whatever age, I think people should be healthy mentally and physically at all times. Cheers to good health! ~~T.Dee
I am 68 years old.
>>CORRECT!
I always thought it was healthy, but I\'m worried about mental health as I get older.
>>I always thought I am healthy, but I\'m worried about my mental health as I get older.
Especially should not suffer from dementia.
>>Especially, I should not suffer from dementia.
If I am not mental healthy than sick, you should worry about my family.
>>If I am not mentally healthy but sick, I should worry about my family.
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