Homework: (Essay) Do you like travelling?
학생이 쓴 원문
Of course
I have planned to travel around the world, but it was a dream. I want to see their food and culture in each country.
Travel is also important with other people together.
Nowadays, I meet friends and go around nice places. I spend time that have a good drinking coffee good food at atmosphere good place.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss. [Name]! I am glad to know that you are having a good time going to places. I hope that you could make your dream a reality. Have a good day!~~T.Dee
Of course
>>Of course, I do.
I have planned to travel around the world, but it was a dream.
>>CORRECT!
I want to see their food and culture in each country.
>>I want to tastes their food and to know about each country\'s culture.
Travel is also important with other people together.
>>Travelling with a group is also important.
Nowadays, I meet friends and go around nice places. I spend time that have a good drinking coffee good food at atmosphere good place.
>>Nowadays, I meet friends and go around nice places. I spend time at places with good coffee, food , and atmosphere.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.