Homework: (Essay) Do you make friends easily?
학생이 쓴 원문
People who see me for the first time are not easily approached.
The reason is that it is difficult to reach me.
It is not easy to make contact with someone I see for the first time, so I can\'t make friends easily.
A school friend is a natural friend, but in society it is not easy to make friends.
But after becoming a friend, I am very close to them.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss. [Name]! I think that you are right. Making friends is never easy. ~~T.Dee
>>People who see me for the first time do not easily approach me.
The reason is that it is difficult to reach me.
The reason is that it is difficult to reach me.
>>CORRECT!
It is not easy to make contact with someone I see for the first time, so I can\'t make friends easily.
>>CORRECT!
A school friend is a natural friend, but in society it is not easy to make friends.
>>Making friends in school natural but in the society it is not easy to make friends.
But after becoming a friend, I am very close to them.
>>But, when I become friends with someone, I get very close to them.
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