Homework; (Essay) Do you spend a long time browsing in bookshops?
학생이 쓴 원문
When I go to the bookstore, I decide to buy in advance book .
I don\'t spend a lot of time in bookstores.
Due to the development of the Internet in Korea, I can buy books and read books without going there.
When I buy books, I usually order them on the Internet.
Also, orders on the Internet can be cut by 10%.
If there is a new book, I sat down in a bookstore and read it for a while.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss. [Name]! I think that you are saving time when you decide in advance on what to buy before going to a bookstore. That is a smart move!~~T.Dee
>>Whenever I go to a bookstore, I decide in advance what book I should buy.
I don\'t spend a lot of time in bookstores.
I don\'t spend a lot of time in bookstores.
>>CORRECT!
Due to the development of the Internet in Korea, I can buy books and read books without going there.
Due to the development of the Internet in Korea, I can buy books and read books without going there.
>>CORRECT!
When I buy books, I usually order them on the Internet.
When I buy books, I usually order them on the Internet.
>>When I buy books, I usually order them from the Internet.
Also, orders on the Internet can be cut by 10%.
Also, orders on the Internet can be cut by 10%.
>>CORRECT!
If there is a new book, I sat down in a bookstore and read it for a while.
If there is a new book, I sat down in a bookstore and read it for a while.
>>If there is a new book, I sit down in a bookstore and read it for a while.
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