Homework: (Essay) Do you think it is safer to eat out or at home?
학생이 쓴 원문
Making food should always be a safe thing to eat.
It\'s like eating out or at home.
I prefer making food at home rather than eating out, so I don\'t eat out often.
My husband advises me to eat out sometimes because it\'s difficult, but sometimes it\'s annoying to even go out.
I used to make even a hamburger at home and give it to my children.
Dining out has a shape and taste, but there is a difference in taste when using seasoning.
I loved to invite people to my house to provide food and tea, but now I\'m older,
so I like convenience so I eat out when I meet friends.
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Making food should always be a safe thing to eat.
>>Making our own food should always be a safe for us to eat.
It\'s like eating out or at home.
It\'s like eating out or at home.
>>It\'s should be the same whether we eat out or we eat at home.
I prefer making food at home rather than eating out, so I don\'t eat out often.
I prefer making food at home rather than eating out, so I don\'t eat out often.
>>I prefer making food at home rather than eating out this is why I don\'t eat out often.
My husband advises me to eat out sometimes because it\'s difficult, but sometimes it\'s annoying to even go out.
My husband advises me to eat out sometimes because it\'s difficult, but sometimes it\'s annoying to even go out.
>>CORRECT!
I used to make even a hamburger at home and give it to my children.
I used to make even a hamburger at home and give it to my children.
>>I even used to make hamburgers at home and I give it to my children.
Dining out has a shape and taste, but there is a difference in taste when using seasoning.
Dining out has a shape and taste, but there is a difference in taste when using seasoning.
>>The food, when dining out, has a different look and taste. It\'s different because of the use some seasonings.
I loved to invite people to my house to provide food and tea, but now I\'m older, so I like convenience so I eat out when I meet friends.
I loved to invite people to my house to provide food and tea, but now I\'m older, so I like convenience so I eat out when I meet friends.
>>I used to love inviting people to my house to provide them food and tea, but not anymore. Now that I\'m older, I prefer convenience so I eat out when I meet my friends.
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