HOMEWORK: ESSAY: Do you think smoking areas should be totally gone? Explain.
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I don\'t think completely disappear smoking areas. Because smoker can\'t suddenly stop smoking. If the smoking areas completely disappear, I think they are more smoking than there was smoking areas. therefore, I think it\'s good to have smoking areas.
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ESSAY: Do you think smoking areas should be totally gone? Explain.
I don\'t think completely disappear smoking areas. Because smoker can\'t suddenly stop smoking.
>>> I don\'t think that the complete disappearance of smoking areas would help because smokers cannot suddenly stop smoking that easily.
If the smoking areas completely disappear, I think they are more smoking than there was smoking areas.
>>> I think a lot of people will smoke anywhere if smoking areas will be completely gone, even in public places.
therefore, I think it\'s good to have smoking areas.
>>> Therefore, I think it\'s good to have smoking areas; better than not having any.
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