Homework: (Essay) Do you think that one day there will be just one language in the world? Would the
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I do not think so.
It would be great if the world used only one language, but I think one language is impossible because of race and region.
each country have their own language and use in a common language like English.
Hangul is a beautiful Korean language and can be write freely horizontally and vertically.
Lahu without language is learning beautiful Hangeul.
I hope Hangul will be the language of the world.
The Lahu live in an alpine warfare between Thailand and Myanmar.
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Hello Miss. [Name]! I think you are right, having one universal languge is not possible. Having different languages is actually better because it becomes part of our identity.~~T.Dee
It would be great if the world used only one language, but I think one language is impossible because of race and region.
>>CORRECT!
each country have their own language and use in a common language like English.
>>Each country have their own language which is used as a common language like English.
Hangul is a beautiful Korean language and can be write freely horizontally and vertically.
>>Hangul is a beautiful Korean language and it can be written freely horizontally and vertically.
Lahu without language is learning beautiful Hangeul.
>>Lahu, which has no language, is learning beautiful Hangeul.
I hope Hangul will be the language of the world.>>CORRECT!
The Lahu live in an alpine warfare between Thailand and Myanmar.
>>The Lahu people live in an alpine warfare between Thailand and Myanmar.
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