Homework: (Essay) Do you think the ambience is important in restaurants?
학생이 쓴 원문
It is important.
People go to good ambience restaurants. Even though it is far away.
everyone go to looking for there.
The restaurant owner has to remodeled fit the times improve the ambience.
The restaurant can successful if the ambience kind of service and delicious foods.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss. [Name]! I completely agree with you ambience is an important factor when dining but it comes with other things too like good food and excellent service.~~T.Dee
It is important.
>>CORRECT!
People go to good ambience restaurants. Even though it is far away.
>>People go to restaurants with good ambience even though it is far away.
everyone go to looking for there.
>>Everyone will go to look into the place.
The restaurant owner has to remodeled fit the times improve the ambience.
>>The restaurant owner has to remodeled fit the times improve the ambience.
The restaurant can successful if the ambience kind of service and delicious foods.
>>The restaurant can be successful if there is good ambience, excellent service and delicious food.
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