Homework: (Essay) Do you trust the information you get from the news?

2020-04-06 · 첨삭 강사 Dee

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We have heard information through TV or newspapers, but nowadays, we receive a lot of news due to the development of cell phones and the Internet. However, it is difficult to trust because there are many fake news. But I trust TV or newspapers more than the internet or sns. Moreover, since news through sns or YouTube is commercial, it is difficult to trust. We live with lots of news, but I believe in what I want to believe. I heard a lot of fake news today. It is decided in my opinion.

강사 첨삭

Hello Miss. [Name]! We all have to be careful with the new that we receive. It is also good to check the sources. ~~T.Dee

We have heard information through TV or newspapers, but nowadays, we receive a lot of news due to the development of cell phones and the Internet.

>>We usually get information from TV or newspapers, but nowadays, we receive a lot of news easily due to the development of cell phones and the Internet.
However, it is difficult to trust because there are many fake news.

>>However, it is difficult to trust them because there are many fake news.
But I trust TV or newspapers more than the internet or sns.

>>CORRECT!
Moreover, since news through sns or YouTube is commercial, it is difficult to trust.

>>Moreover, since news through sns or YouTube is commercial, it is difficult to trust.
We live with lots of news, but I believe in what I want to believe.

>>CORRECT!
I heard a lot of fake news today.

>>CORRECT!
It is decided in my opinion.

>>I decided what to believe according to my opinion.

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