Homework: (Essay) Does watching TV make you stressed?
학생이 쓴 원문
I rarely watch TV.It is more so these days. TV is a corona 19 growth rate and political story.
TV is fun, but it\'s a waste of time. I fall asleep while watching TV when I have nothing to do.
The daughter has no TV for the child.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss. [Name]! I guess it\'s the same all over the world. The same news and the same issues are talked about. Let\'s hope that everything will be better soon.~~T.Dee
I rarely watch TV.It is more so these days. TV is a corona 19 growth rate and political story.
>>I rarely watch TV. It is more so these days. The news on TV is all about COVID 19 and other political issues.
TV is fun, but it\'s a waste of time. I fall asleep while watching TV when I have nothing to do.
>>Watching TV is fun, but it\'s a waste of time. I fall asleep while watching TV when I have nothing to do.
The daughter has no TV for the child.
>>My daughter does let her child watch TV.
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