Homework: (Essay) Have you ever thought of fighting crime by becoming a police officer?
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was young, I wanted to be a female soldier.
I wanted to work for the country, but as I grew up, the dream naturally disappeared.
I like justice but I don\'t like fighting.
But the police are great.
강사 첨삭
Hello Misss HS! Your dream is very inspiring. I think that your life would be different if you were a female soldier. Not everyone have the same dream. ~~T.Dee
When I was young, I wanted to be a female soldier.
>>CORRECT!
I wanted to work for the country, but as I grew up, the dream naturally disappeared.
>>CORRECT!
I like justice but I don\'t like fighting.
>>I believe in justice but I don\'t like fighting crimes.
But the police are great.
>>CORRECT!
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