Homework: (Essay) How can you make sure learning is always fun?

2020-03-09 · 첨삭 강사 Dee

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It is a really difficult question, Learning should be like and need. It\'s fun to have a good relationship with someone when you learn. The important thing is to tell people the story of how they live. People are interested, listening, talking and having fun. It is fun and good to study with convenience because the times are getting better.

강사 첨삭

Hello Miss. [Name]! Thank you for sending your homework today. Learning is never easy but you can make it fun. Have a good day!~~T.Dee

It is a really difficult question, 
>>CORRECT!
Learning should be like and need.
>>Learning should be something that you like and need.
It\'s fun to have a good relationship with someone when you learn. 
>>CORRECT!
The important thing is to tell people the story of how they live. 
>> The important thing is to tell people the story of how we live.
People are interested, listening, talking and having fun. 
>>People are interested to listen, talk and have fun.
It is fun and good to study with convenience because the times are getting better. 
>>CORRECT!

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