Homework Essay: How do you feel about your English learning so far? What are your expectations in ou
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Thank you so much Mr. [이름] for answering our essay questions. We will definitely have an amusing class. We\'ll also be practicing more on our R, L, P and F throughout the whole class.
Please don\'t hesitate to ask questions in our upcoming classes.
Talk to you soon!
Have a great weekend!
~Teacher Eve.
I have been learning English for thirty years.
>> Correct!
>> OR: I have been learning English for the past thirty years.
I first experienced with English when I was a middle school student.
>> I had my first experience in speaking in English when I was a middle school student.
>> OR: I had my first experience in speaking in English when I was in middle school.
At that time, my English learning was just memorizing words and sentences mainly for examination.
>> Correct!
>> During that time, I was learning English by memorizing words and sentences for examination purposes.
I think my English skill enhanced when I met foreigners at my university.
>> I think I was able to enhance my English skills when I met foreigners in university.
In addition, I realized that there was something wrong with my pronunciation.
>> Correct!
This is because my foreign friends had some trouble to understand my speaking, whereas they understood when I wrote it down.
>> My foreign friends are having trouble understanding me when I\'m speaking. They understand me more when I write things down.
Hence, after that, I practiced pronunciation and intonation, but there is still big room for improvement.
>> Hence, after that, I practice my pronunciation and intonation, but there is still room for improvement.
My expectation in this class:
>> My expectations for this class:
First of all, I want to have an amusing time in our class.
>> First of all, I want to have an amusing class time.
Also, I want my teacher correct me when I pronounce some words inappropriately.
>> Also, I want my teacher to correct me when I pronounce some words wrong.
(Especially it\'s not easy for me to differentiate between r and l, and p and f).
>> (Especially in differentiating R and L, P and F)
Often, I do communicate with a word instead of a full sentence.
>> I often communicate with words rather than full sentences.
Therefore, I expect to enhance my skill to make a sentence during conversation.
>> Therefore, I expect to enhance my skills to be able to construct full sentences during a conversation.
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