Homework Essay: How do you feel about your English learning so far? What are your expectations in ou

2020-01-07 · 첨삭 강사 Eve

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I have been learning English for thirty years. I first experienced with English when I was a middle school student. At that time, my English learning was just memorizing words and sentences mainly for examination. I think my English skill enhanced when I met foreigners at my university. In addition, I realized that there was something wrong with my pronunciation. This is because my foreign friends had some trouble to understand my speaking, whereas they understood when I wrote it down. Hence, after that, I practiced pronunciation and intonation, but there is still big room for improvement. My expectation in this class: First of all, I want to have an amusing time in our class. Also, I want my teacher correct me when I pronounce some words inappropriately. (Especially it\'s not easy for me to differentiate between r and l, and p and f). Often, I do communicate with a word instead of a full sentence. Therefore, I expect to enhance my skill to make a sentence during conversation.

강사 첨삭

Thank you so much Mr. [이름] for answering our essay questions. We will definitely have an amusing class. We\'ll also be practicing more on our R, L, P and F throughout the whole class.

Please don\'t hesitate to ask questions in our upcoming classes.

Talk to you soon!

Have a great weekend!

~Teacher Eve.

I have been learning English for thirty years. 

>> Correct!

>> OR: I have been learning English for the past thirty years.
 I first experienced with English when I was a middle school student. 

>> I had my first experience in speaking in English when I was a middle school student.

>> OR: I had my first experience in speaking in English when I was in middle school.
 At that time, my English learning was just memorizing words and sentences mainly for examination. 

>> Correct!

>> During that time, I was learning English by memorizing words and sentences for examination purposes.
 I think my English skill enhanced when I met foreigners at my university. 

>> I think I was able to enhance my English skills when I met foreigners in university.
 In addition, I realized that there was something wrong with my pronunciation.

>> Correct!
 This is because my foreign friends had some trouble to understand my speaking, whereas they understood when I wrote it down. 

>> My foreign friends are having trouble understanding me when I\'m speaking. They understand me more when I write things down.
 Hence, after that, I practiced pronunciation and intonation, but there is still big room for improvement. 

>> Hence, after that, I practice my pronunciation and intonation, but there is still room for improvement. 
 My expectation in this class:

>> My expectations for this class:
 First of all, I want to have an amusing time in our class. 

>> First of all, I want to have an amusing class time.
 Also, I want my teacher correct me when I pronounce some words inappropriately.

>> Also, I want my teacher to correct me when I pronounce some words wrong.
 (Especially it\'s not easy for me to differentiate between r and l, and p and f).

>> (Especially in differentiating R and L, P and F)
 Often, I do communicate with a word instead of a full sentence.

>> I often communicate with words rather than full sentences.
 Therefore, I expect to enhance my skill to make a sentence during conversation.

>> Therefore, I expect to enhance my skills to be able to construct full sentences during a conversation.

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