Homework: (Essay) How is communication changing between people?
학생이 쓴 원문
Communication changes depending on the person you lead.
While talking on the subject. When the consensus is formed, we will talk in detail.
lf there are multiple people speaking differently in the conversation,
We do not listen to his story.
Naturally, people who interact with each other get close.
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Communication changes depending on the person you lead.
>>Communication changes depending on the person you are talking to.
While talking on the subject. When the consensus is formed, we will talk in detail.
>>While talking about a topic and when the consensus is formed, we will talk in detail.
lf there are multiple people speaking differently in the conversation, We do not listen to his story.
>>lf there are multiple people speaking different things in the conversation, we might not listen to them.
Naturally, people who interact with each other get close.
>>Naturally, people who interact with each other get close to each other.
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