Homework; (Essay) Should you talk everyday in a long distance relationship?
학생이 쓴 원문
I communicate with my children every day through KakaoTalk.
They live in Australia, and the time difference from Korea is two hours, so there is no difficulty in talking.
Moreover, Korea is the world\'s No. 1 electronic technology. And if you have a mobile phone, the fee is free.
강사 첨삭
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They live in Australia, and the time difference from Korea is two hours, so there is no difficulty in talking.
They live in Australia, and the time difference from Korea is two hours, so there is no difficulty in talking.
>>They live in Australia, and the time difference with Korea is two hours, so there is no difficulty when we talking.
Moreover, Korea is the world\'s No. 1 electronic technology. And if you have a mobile phone, the fee is free.
Moreover, Korea is the world\'s No. 1 electronic technology. And if you have a mobile phone, the fee is free.
>>Moreover, Korea the world\'s No. 1 in terms of electronic technology. As long as you have a mobile phone, the fee is free.
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