Homework: (Essay) What advice would you give to people starting in business?
학생이 쓴 원문
If you are sincere, your business will be successful.
Gain trust first.
Please give your good idea and quality goods to your opponent.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss. [Name]! Your advice is really good. I agree with everything. Check the corrections below. Have a good day! ~~T.DEE
If you are sincere, your business will be successful.
>>CORRECT!
Gain trust first.
>>CORRECT!
>>OR: First, establish loyal customers.
Please give your good idea and quality goods to your opponent.
>>Please give attention to develop good ideas and compare the quality of your goods to your competitors.
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