Homework: (Essay) What are the dangers of having your own business?
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Business is about making profits, and it is based on a lot of experience, know-how and capital. Learning step by step to build trust and sincerely communicating is the biggest factor in reducing risk.
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Hi Miss. [Name]! I think that you are right. It is never easy to set up a business. It needs a lot of skills otherwise it will result to failure. I hope you\'ll have a good day!~~T.Dee
Business is about making profits, and it is based on a lot of experience, know-how and capital.
>>CORRECT!
Learning step by step to build trust and sincerely communicating is the biggest factor in reducing risk.
>>Learning step by step to build trust and to sincerely communicate is the biggest factor in reducing risk in business.
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