Homework; (Essay) What do you and your families do on the weekend?
학생이 쓴 원문
I am the mother of two children. My children live in Australia and I live with my husband in Seoul, Korea.
I almost play golf on the weekends. On weekends when I don\'t play golf, my husband likes to a nap but I don\'t allow it.
I enjoy going to the sauna or shopping.
Today Sunday, I invited my cousins to my house and served them with delicious food.
We met for a long time and talked about protecting our health in today\'s virus war.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss. [Name]! Spending time with the family on weekends is not easy nowadays because everyone is busy. Making time for family is really precious. I hope you\'ll have more time with them next time. have a good day!~~T.Dee
>>I am a mother of two children. My children live in Australia and I live with my husband in Seoul, South Korea.
I almost play golf on the weekends. On weekends when I don\'t play golf, my husband likes to a nap but I don\'t allow it.
I almost play golf on the weekends. On weekends when I don\'t play golf, my husband likes to a nap but I don\'t allow it.
>>I mostly play golf on the weekends. When I don\'t play golf, my husband likes to a nap but I don\'t allow it.
I enjoy going to the sauna or shopping.
I enjoy going to the sauna or shopping.
>>CORRECT!
Today Sunday, I invited my cousins to my house and I served them with delicious food.
Today Sunday, I invited my cousins to my house and I served them with delicious food.
>>Today, which is Sunday, I invited my cousins to my house and served them with delicious food.
We met for a long time and talked about protecting our health in today\'s virus war.
We met for a long time and talked about protecting our health in today\'s virus war.
>>We spent time together for a long time and we talked about protecting our health in today\'s virus war.
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