Homework: (Essay) What do you like to do during the flight?
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I mainly watch movies in flight.What I can do on long flights is to sleep or watch TV.
What I want to do in flight is, If there is an in-flight item
I want, I will purchase it.
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I mainly watch movies in flight. What I can do on long flights is to sleep or watch TV.
>>I mainly watch movies during the flight. What I can do on long flights is to sleep or watch TV.
What I want to do in flight is, If there is an in-flight item I want, I will purchase it.
What I want to do in flight is, If there is an in-flight item I want, I will purchase it.
>>What I want to do during the flight is to purchase any in-flight item for sale if there is any.
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