Homework: (Essay) What is your favorite section of the newspaper to read?
학생이 쓴 원문
I read mostly social pages in newspapers.
I don\'t like politics, I don\'t care about the economy, and I watch society run.
When talking with friends, I usually talk about issues.
강사 첨삭
Hi Miss. [Name]! The daily news include several issues and it\'s not easy to ignore. Let us hope that there is always some good news to read about.~~T.Dee
I read mostly social pages in newspapers.
>>CORRECT!
I don\'t like politics, I don\'t care about the economy, and I watch society run.
>>CORRECT!
>>OR: I am not interested about politics and economy. I just wait and see what happens.
When talking with friends, I usually talk about issues.
>>When talking with friends, I usually talk about the recent issues.
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