Homework: (Essay) What’s the most memorable weekend have you had in the past years?
학생이 쓴 원문
I always play golf with my husband on weekends.
One day, I lied to my husband because I am sick so I can\'t go play golf.
Then I played with my friends. I watched movie, I went shopping , I drank coffee
I can\'t forget the fun of it .
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss. [Name]! It\'s sounds really fun. Sometimes we have to break away from our routine and do something spontaneous. Have a good day! ~~T.Dee
I always play golf with my husband on weekends.
>>CORRECT!
One day, I lied to my husband because I am sick so I can\'t go play golf.
>>CORRECT!
Then I played with my friends. I watched movie, I went shopping , I drank coffee
>>Then I played with my friends. I watched a movie, I went shopping and I drank coffee.
I can\'t forget the fun of it .
>>CORRECT!
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