Homework: (Essay) Where is your hometown? Is your hometown famous for anything?
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강사 첨삭
Hello Miss. [Name]! Thank you for telling me about your hometown. I am happy to know that you appreciate many things about it. Take note of the corrections I made for you. Remember to always end your sentences with a period. Have a good day!~~T.Dee
My hometown is Seoul.
>>CORRECT!
My family went to Chungcheong-do in a war that took place on June 25, 1950, and I was born there and immediately came to Seoul.
>> My family went to Chungcheong-do during the war that took place on June 25, 1950 and I was born there but we immediately moved to Seoul City.
Everything is convenient in Seoul
>>Everything is convenient in Seoul.
Education, culture, transportation, etc. always appreciate.
>>The quality of education, the culture, the transportation, etc are always admirable.
>>OR: I appreciate a lot of things about Seoul like the quality of education, the culture, the good transportation system it has and many more.
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