Homework: (Essay) Why do humans like music so much?
학생이 쓴 원문
Music moves our minds.
It can uplift pleasure and down sadness.
Where there is music is fun and everyone loves to listen.
Even people who don\'t sing well don\'t hate listening.
Music is also a good cure for life.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss. [Name]! Indeed, music is very powerful. It can easily improve a person\'s mood. I hope you could listen to your favorite song today. Have a good day!~~T.Dee
Music moves our minds.
>>CORRECT!
It can uplift pleasure and down sadness.
>>It can uplift us from sadness and heighten our pleasure.
Where there is music is fun and everyone loves to listen.
>>CORRECT!
Even people who don\'t sing well don\'t hate listening.
>>CORRECT!
Music is also a good cure for life.
>>CORRECT!
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