Homework Essay: Why is English fluency significant for you?
학생이 쓴 원문
English fluency is quite important for me (also for everyone I think).
Assume that we have something to talk, but can not express it due to the shortage of English skill.
Of course, we could speak using just a simple word or a short sentence.
Even we describe it using broken English or body language.
However, the conversation can not be long without English fluency.
Furthermore, limited fluency can affect your confidence, leading to hesitate to start talking with foreigners.
As a conclusion, I think English fluency is one of the key elements to make a close friend and to cooperate with other people.
강사 첨삭
Hello Jong Mu! Thank you for this. Very well said. In this global society, English conversation skill is indeed necessary.
- T. Beth
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English fluency is quite important for me (also for everyone I think).>>> correct
Assume that we have something to talk, but can not express it due to the shortage of English skill.
Assume that we have something to talk, but can not express it due to the shortage of English skill.
>>> correct
>>> Assuming that we have something to talk, but can not express it due to the shortage of English conversation skill.
Of course, we could speak using just a simple word or a short sentence.
Of course, we could speak using just a simple word or a short sentence.
>>> correct
Even we describe it using broken English or body language.
Even we describe it using broken English or body language.
>>> We can even describe it using broken English or body language.
However, the conversation can not be long without English fluency.
However, the conversation can not be long without English fluency.
>>> However, the conversation would not last long without English fluency.
Furthermore, limited fluency can affect your confidence, leading to hesitate to start talking with foreigners.
>>> Furthermore, limited fluency can affect your confidence, leading to hesitation to start talking with foreigners.
As a conclusion, I think English fluency is one of the key elements to make a close friend and to cooperate with other people.
>>> correct
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