Homework(family trip)
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강사 첨삭
Good afternoon [이름]! You will surely treasure the moments when you were in the USA.
Have a safe trip and enjoy it! ^^
~~May~~
There are many kinds of travel in this world. Among them, traveling with family gives us memories and happiness wherever we go. When I was young, I went on an East trip with my family for the first time.
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Although it was a long and difficult trip at the time, it still exists in my memory.
>> Although it was a long and hassle trip, I can still remember it.
Whenever I think of that memory, it makes me happy with a precious album.
I go on a trip sometimes to make many memories with my family album.
A few years ago, I have been to U.S.A.
when I was in America, I happened to talk with my American friend.
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At that time, my first son is one year old so I wonder if he will remember this family trip.
>> At that time, my first son WAS one year old so I wonder if he could still remember this family trip.
The friend replied to me that the memories and feelings of being together would be remembered.
>> My friend replied and said that the memories and feelings of being together would be remembered.
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