Homework(Feb/26)

2013-02-27 · 첨삭 강사 wendy

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: If there is one[1] word that would best describe you, what would it be and why? Explain your answer in not less t[이름] 3 sentences. :) -> To teacher Wendy~^^ Although i think this is a easy question, i could not answer simply. Because i maybe have no a considering time about myself. ^^;;; so anyway this homework was difficult for me I want to express me a stone. The stone is simple, in a state of nature, feeling of strong and ignorance, but has a possibility of development to ability to be beautiful, if it was carve nicely. When i was young, i am a man who has little bit a sharp & keen character. As time goes by, i studied how to drive relationship with in each other and what i never live alone. After having a family, i knew the responsibility as daddy, husband. Beyond that, as i want to learn what i want to do. i want to live a life of self-satisfection. Like a stone properly faced.

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Your homework is very interesting! I enjoyed reading so THUMB UP! Your family is lucky to have you because of yur strong personality. If I had a word that can describe me, it will be FEARLESS. I love trying new things and taking the risk. Like you, I was a little sharp before. Here are your corrections. See you in class. _T. WENDY ^^ -> To teacher Wendy~^^ >> CorrectAlthough i think this is a easy question, i could not answer simply. >> Although I think that this is an easy question, I couldn\'t simply answer. Because i maybe have no a considering time about myself. ^^;;; >> Because I maybe have no time considering myself. so anyway this homework was difficult for me>>So anyway, this homework is difficult for me.I want to express me a stone. >>I want to express myself as a stone.The stone is simple, in a state of nature, feeling of strong and ignorance, but has a possibility of development to ability to be beautiful, if it was carve nicely.>> The stone is simple, in the state of nature, feeling of strrength and ignorance, but has a possibility of development to ability to be beautiful, if it was carved nicely.When i was young, i am a man who has little bit a sharp & keen character. >> When I was young, I was a man who had a little bit of sharpness and keen character.As time goes by, i studied how to drive relationship with in each other and what i never live alone. >> As time goes by, i studied how to drive a relationship within each other and i never lived alone.After having a family, i knew the responsibility as daddy, husband.>> After having a family, i knew the responsibility as a daddy and a husband.Beyond that, as i want to learn what i want to do. >> Beyond that, I wanted to learn what I can do. i want to live a life of self-satisfection. >> CorrectLike a stone properly faced. >> Correct

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