Homework(Feb/26)
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
If there is one[1] word that would best describe you, what would it be and why? Explain your answer in not less t[이름] 3 sentences. :)
-> To teacher Wendy~^^
Although i think this is a easy question, i could not answer simply. Because i maybe have no a considering time about myself. ^^;;; so anyway this homework was difficult for me
I want to express me a stone.
The stone is simple, in a state of nature, feeling of strong and ignorance, but has a possibility of development to ability to be beautiful, if it was carve nicely.
When i was young, i am a man who has little bit a sharp & keen character.
As time goes by, i studied how to drive relationship with in each other and what i never live alone.
After having a family, i knew the responsibility as daddy, husband.
Beyond that, as i want to learn what i want to do. i want to live a life of self-satisfection.
Like a stone properly faced.
강사 첨삭
Your homework is very interesting!
I enjoyed reading so THUMB UP!
Your family is lucky to have you because of yur strong personality.
If I had a word that can describe me,
it will be FEARLESS.
I love trying new things and taking the risk.
Like you, I was a little sharp before.
Here are your corrections.
See you in class.
_T. WENDY ^^
-> To teacher Wendy~^^
>> CorrectAlthough i think this is a easy question, i could not answer simply.
>> Although I think that this is an easy question, I couldn\'t simply answer.
Because i maybe have no a considering time about myself. ^^;;;
>> Because I maybe have no time considering myself.
so anyway this homework was difficult for me>>So anyway, this homework is difficult for me.I want to express me a stone.
>>I want to express myself as a stone.The stone is simple, in a state of nature, feeling of strong and ignorance, but has a possibility of development to ability to be beautiful, if it was carve nicely.>> The stone is simple, in the state of nature, feeling of strrength and ignorance, but has a possibility of development to ability to be beautiful, if it was carved nicely.When i was young, i am a man who has little bit a sharp & keen character.
>> When I was young, I was a man who had a little bit of sharpness and keen character.As time goes by, i studied how to drive relationship with in each other and what i never live alone.
>> As time goes by, i studied how to drive a relationship within each other and i never lived alone.After having a family, i knew the responsibility as daddy, husband.>> After having a family, i knew the responsibility as a daddy and a husband.Beyond that, as i want to learn what i want to do.
>> Beyond that, I wanted to learn what I can do.
i want to live a life of self-satisfection.
>> CorrectLike a stone properly faced.
>> Correct
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