Homework Feb 27 : since or for / Diary : don't shoot an email when you're upset.
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(HW)1.for Easter2.for two weeks3.for my birthday4.since last summer5.since 1999 6.for ten days7.for a few minutes8.since 1st April9.for a long time10.for 6 o'clock(Diary: don't shoot an email when you're upset.)6 years ago, a global marketing director in Shell, one of the biggest oil companies in the world, visited A&M University, and gave a presentation in an auditorium. He mentioned one of the mistakes he made as working in Shell was to send an email to his colleague with fury and anger. At that time, he had been totall upset to his colleague because his comrade had stolen his achievments. However, he said it was his big mistake. He advised us not to write an email when we can't control our emotion. After we calm down our mind, we can see what the matter is, and respond it more wisely, he said. It occurred to me that I had similar experience today. I was frustrated to the fact that I didn't pass an e-learning course that I took this month. I wrote an email to the e-learning manager.
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Hi Sir [이름]! Thank you for sharing this story with me. I think it is understandable if someone will commit a mistake of sending a hate letter to another. This is because we cannot control our emotions most of the time. But the problem is if it hinders us from thinking righteously because this kind of action can ruin our relationship with other people.
Anyway, thank you once again for this, I\'ve learned something today. ^^
See you later in class! Cheerios!
Teacher GRACE
(HW)1.for Easter
>> since
2.for two weeks
>> Correct
3.for my birthday
>> Correct
4.since last summer
>> Correct
5.since 1999
>> Correct
6.for ten days
>> Correct
7.for a few minutes
>> Correct
8.since 1st April
>> Correct
9.for a long time
>> Correct
10.for 6 o\'clock
>> since
(Diary: don\'t shoot an email when you\'re upset.)
>> Diary: \"Don\'t shoot an e-mail if you\'re upset\"
6 years ago, a global marketing director in Shell, one of the biggest oil companies in the world, visited A&M University, and gave a presentation in an auditorium.
>> Six years ago, a global marketing director of Shell, one of the biggest oil companies in the world, went to A&M University to deliver a speech.
He mentioned one of the mistakes he made as working in Shell was to send an email to his colleague with fury and anger. At that time, he had been totall upset to his colleague because his comrade had stolen his achievments.
>> He mentioned about one of his biggest mistakes as a worker in that company. He furiously sent an e-mail to his colleague because he was upset as his colleague had stolen his achievements.
However, he said it was his big mistake.
>> Correct
He advised us not to write an email when we can\'t control our emotion.
>> He advised us not to send an e-mail to someone if we\'re still angry and can\'t control our emotion.
After we calm down our mind, we can see what the matter is, and respond it more wisely, he said.
>> We should face it calmly, try to examine the real problem and address it wisely, he said.
It occurred to me that I had similar experience today. I was frustrated to the fact that I didn\'t pass an e-learning course that I took this month. I wrote an email to the e-learning manager.
>> I think his example already happened to me as I sent an e-mail to the manager of the e-learning institute. I didn\'t pass the course I took this month.
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