homework !! finished

2011-11-28 · 첨삭 강사 Nica

학생이 쓴 원문

1.yesterday I went to washington D.C 2.everyday, Mr.johnson clean his living room 3.they usually takes the bus to the office 4.right now susan eats her breakfast 5.melinda and harn works in the bank teacher !! !!,I did it. Hahaha. Have a nice weekand!!!

강사 첨삭

Hi!!! You did a great job on you homework!!! Very good!!!  I\'m so proud of you!! Keep up the good work! See you in class. Have a nice day!   Here are my corrections:   1.yesterday I went to washington D.C >> Yesterday, I went to Washington D.C.2.everyday, Mr.johnson clean his living room >>Correct! Please don\'t forget your punctuation mark after the sentence-period and capitalize the first letter of the word on your sentence.3.they usually takes the bus to the office>>They usually take the bus to the office.4.right now susan eats her breakfast>>Correct! Please don\'t forget your punctuation mark after the sentence-period and to capitalize the first letter of the word on your sentence.5.melinda and harn works in the bank>>Melinda and Harn work in the bank.teacher !! !!,I did it. Hahaha. >>Correct! Have a nice weekand!!! >>Have a nice weekend!!!!

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