Homework for 02.06

2017-02-08 · 첨삭 강사 Sophia

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1. Are you shopping for a health club to join so you can get in shape? 2. Shop wisely! You could end up choosing a wrong club and losing more nomey than pounds. 3. You may find out too late that a health clubs aren't for you. 4. The San Diego fitness experts recommend thoroughly checking out several health clubs before you join one. 5. First, know what you want and need in a fitness facility, and don't pay for what you'll never use. 6. If you only want exercise classes, an exercise studio weight machines and locker rooms may work for you. 7. If you're looking for a place to only do bodybuilding. you'll be happy in a basic gym. 8. You may be in the market for a full-service health club; then, make sure it offers lots of activities. 9.You may find out too late that a health clubs aren't for you. 10.They should be educated in physical education or certified by the organization such as the American Council on exercise.

강사 첨삭

Hello Ms. [이름],

Thank you for doing your homework.

Have a nice day ahead!

Teacher Sophia ^^

Here are your answers:

1. Are you shopping for a health club to join so you can get in shape?
>> CORRECT 
2. Shop wisely! You could end up choosing a wrong club and losing more nomey than pounds.
>> the
3. You may find out too late that a health clubs aren\'t for you.
>> no article is needed
4. The San Diego fitness experts recommend thoroughly checking out several health clubs before you join one.
>> no article is needed
5. First, know what you want and need in a fitness facility, and don\'t pay for what you\'ll never use.
>>  CORRECT 
6. If you only want exercise classes, an exercise studio weight machines and locker rooms may work for you.
>>  CORRECT 
7. If you\'re looking for a place to only do bodybuilding. you\'ll be happy in a basic gym.
>> CORRECT   
8. You may be in the market for a full-service health club; then, make sure it offers lots of activities.
>>  CORRECT 
9.You may find out too late that a health clubs aren\'t for you.
>> the
10.They should be educated in physical education or certified by the organization such as the American Council on exercise.

>> an

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