Homework for 07/23/2018

Hello Glenda,

My name is [이름] and I am living in Canada.

>>> Correct

I have been living here for three years now and with my family, my husband and little girl.

>>> Correct

or

>>> I have been living here with my husband and my little girl for three years now.

I am working as Bookkeeper in Mississauga, nearby my town.

>>> Correct

For now, the reason why I am studying English is getting high score on Ielts Test due to getting permanent residency and improving speaking skills while I am working.

>>> For now, the reason why I am studying English is to get a high score on IELTS test to get a permanent residency and to also improve my speaking skills while I\'m working.

During a class, I would like you to correct me whenever I say something in wrong way.

>>> During the class, I would like you to correct me whenever I say something in wrong way.

Also, I wanted to learn higher level English in terms of vocabulary and expressions. 

>>> Also, I want to learn higher level English in terms of vocabulary and expressions. 
 My strength in speaking English is following well to get used to it whenever I have heard new expressions.

>>>  My strength in speaking English is following instructions well and getting used to expressions whenever I hear new ones.

However, my weakness is that I am feeling difficult multiple times to complete sentences.

>>> However, my weakness is I often find it difficult to complete my sentences.

I need to have confidence on my speaking English.

>>> I need to have confidence in my  English speaking skills.
 I have no doubt that you can help me to get best score in Ielts and my English skills in work as well.

>>>  I have no doubt that you can help me to get best score in IELTS and my English skills at work as well.
 I will try to do my best every day with you.
Thank you !