Homework for 07/28
학생이 쓴 원문
What are the dangers of having our own business
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It would be great if there was a lot of profits, but before that, there are a lot of risks.
Without a certain amount of investment for future returns and the mental toughness to sit on the losses, I think I\'ll be shaken by anxiety.
I think having our own business is exposure to these mental and financial risks.
강사 첨삭
Good morning, Su [이름]!
It takes courage, wisdom and learn from people who have great experience before engaging or setting up a business.
I think having our own business is exposure to these mental and financial risks.
Have a wonderful day!
Aki~
It would be great if there was a lot of profits, but before that, there are a lot of risks.
>>> CORRECT!
Without a certain amount of investment for future returns and the mental toughness to sit on the losses, I think I\'ll be shaken by anxiety.
>>> CORRECT!
I think having our own business is exposure to these mental and financial risks.
>>> CORRECT!
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