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2014-07-31 · 첨삭 강사 Debby

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Hi there Debby :) I use so many ways to learn English. For example, I listen to a pop song and watch a movie or drama without subtitles for listening. Is it also effective way to learn English? How do you think about that? Speaking of these ways, so many people in a drama or movie use the word "gotta" instead of "should", "have to" and etc. What's exact meaning of "gotta" and when should I use this? I can't find what is difference between them. Please give me advice for that. :D Then see you~ <Essay> TV is the most effective way to inform information. Almost more than half population in the world watch TV everyday. So It is no wonder that TV is the most powerful way to announce I think. How about you? What way of media do you think is the most efficient?

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Hi there [이름]!^^ How are you? I think that the most popular is the internet but like you, I think that I will share the same brain as you to consider that the television is the most convinient. For one thing it\'s entertaining and it\'s effortless.^^ About \"gotta\"...Well, it\'s one of the words that is mostly used in speaking but in writing it\'s not advisable to use. The meanings could come in many ideas like: going to, have to, must, should should have, etc. and it comes from the \"got\" the opposite of \"get\". It\'s a word you use to express an idea of wanting to do something. ex: I gotta go. ( I have to go) T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you: Hi there Debby :) >> CORRECT OR> How are you Debby?^^I use so many ways to learn English. >> CORRECT OR> I learned English in many ways. For example, I listen to a pop song and watch a movie or drama without subtitles for listening. >> CORRECT OR> An example is that I watched movies and dramas without the subtitles. Is it also effective way to learn English? How do you think about that?>> Is it also an effective way to learn English? What do you think about that?Speaking of these ways, so many people in a drama or movie use the word \"gotta\" instead of \"should\", \"have to\" and etc. What\'s the exact meaning of \"gotta\" and when should I use this? >> CORRECT OR> I have seen people in movies use \"gotta\" and I wonder if i have to use that.  I can\'t find what is difference between them. Please give me advice for that. :D>> CORRECT OR> I\'m not sure about the differences can you explain it to me?Then see you~ >> CORRECT OR> I will see you later!^^<Essay>TV is the most effective way to inform information. >> CORRECT OR> Television is the best way to provide information.  Almost more than half population in the world watch TV everyday. >> Almost more than half of the population in the world watch TV everyday. So It is no wonder that TV is the most powerful way to announce I think. >> So it is no wonder that the TV is the most powerful way to announce I think.How about you? What way of media do you think is the most efficient? >> CORRECT OR> In your idea, which one is the most convinient?

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