Homework for 08/04
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there Debby :)
I've asked myself what I want to know about English. There's not a lot of questions though, I might have more questions. Of course I will. I'm pretty sure.
Anyway, I don't believe that the typoon is lasting for a long time like that. We've got only one or two times during a year. As you said, it is not good thought to be there during a rainy season.
Don't worry about studying English.
Then see you.
Take care :D
<Essay>
I don't think so. If we can control money properly, it is not bad. We all face to take care of with money. We always have in trouble because of money. If we get a lot money, we won't need to worry about them.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!^^
I\'m sure you\'ll have a lot of curious questions!^^
You should be a reporter in the future or an investigator!
hahahahahahaha.. You\'ll do a good job!
For now you have a great curiousity which would be you strength as a
student! ^^
I wish I then have a lot of money so I can buy many things
than can solve my problems. Like a really nice cellphone that can
have a great alarm clock to wake me up!
hahahahaha..
What would you buy if you have millions?
Take care!^^
T.Debby^^
Here are my corrections for you today:
Hi there Debby :)>> What\'s up Debby^^I\'ve asked myself what I want to know about English.
>> CORRECT
Or> I try to know what I like to learn in English.
There\'s not a lot of questions though, I might have more questions.
>> CORRECT
OR> I don\'t ask much but I might want more information.
Of course I will. I\'m pretty sure.
>> CORRECT
OR> I\'m pretty sure I will!^^Anyway, I don\'t believe that the typoon is lasting for a long time like that.
>> CORRECT
OR> I don\'t think that the typhoon would last long.
We\'ve got only one or two times during a year.
>> CORRECT
OR> We only have like on or two in one year!^^
As you said, it is not good thought to be there during a rainy season.
>> As you said, it is not a good thought to be there during a rainy season.Don\'t worry about studying English.>> CORRECT
OR> Don\'t mind studying English too much.Then see you.Take care :D>> See you soon and take care!^^<Essay>I don\'t think so. If we can control money properly, it is not bad.
>> CORRECT
OR> I disagree, as long as we have control over money it won\'t be bad.
We all face to take care of with money.
>> We all face moments that we need to take care of with money.
We always have in trouble because of money.
>> We always have a trouble because of money.
If we get a lot money, we won\'t need to worry about them.
>> CORRECT
OR> things would be better if we have a lot of money.
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