Homework for 08/08
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello there Debby :)
How was your second weekend of this month? Is there any special thing you did?
I'm pretty sure that it was a funny weekned, because the time passed by fast. I want to be staying in my home, but I always try not to think lazy things like that I'm not going to go exercise. It will be happy that there's more time during a weekned.
Let me see you tommorw!
Take care :D
<Essay>
I want to go to Amreica first. There's big territory which can travel around, many people I can talk with in English and nice bulidings soaring up... It is a country for freedom I want to feel. I always want to go there sins I wan very young. Please cross your finger for hope that I can go there. XD
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]!^^
I will cross both the fingers in my left and right hand
and when I see a shooting star I will wish for that too!^^
I think that it\'s a good experience for you!^^
I think that your personality is something that foreigners would like!
So go to America and adapt an accent!
Good luck!^^
T.Debby^^
PS: Mind you spellings^^
Here are my corrections for you:
Hello there Debby :)
>> CORRECT
OR> Hey Debby^^How was your second weekend of this month?
>> CORRECT
OR> How did your second weekend of the month go?Is there any special thing you did?
>> Is there any special thing that you did?I\'m pretty sure that it was a funny weekned, because the time passed by fast.
>> I\'m pretty sure that it was a fun weekned, because the time passed by fast.
I want to be staying in my home, but I always try not to think lazy things like that I\'m not going to go exercise.
>> I want to be staying in my home, but I always try not to think of lazy things like that I\'m not going to go exercise. It will be happy that there\'s more time during a weekned.
>> It will be happy that there\'s more time during a weekend.Let me see you tommorw!
>> Let me see you tomorrow!Take care :D>> CORRECT
OR> Take lots of care!^^
<Essay>I want to go to Amreica first.
>>I want to go to America first.
OR> Mt first destination would be America.There\'s big territory which can travel around, many people I can talk with in English and nice bulidings soaring up...
>> There\'s a big territory of which we can travel around, many people I can talk with in English and nice bulidings are soaring up... It is a country for freedom I want to feel.
>> It is a country for freedom that I want to feel. I always want to go there sins I wan very young.
>> I\'ve always wanted to go there since I was very young. Please cross your finger for hope that I can go there. XD
>> Please cross your finger for the hope that I can go there. XD
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