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2014-08-11 · 첨삭 강사 Debby

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Hello there Debby :) How was your second weekend of this month? Is there any special thing you did? I'm pretty sure that it was a funny weekned, because the time passed by fast. I want to be staying in my home, but I always try not to think lazy things like that I'm not going to go exercise. It will be happy that there's more time during a weekned. Let me see you tommorw! Take care :D <Essay> I want to go to Amreica first. There's big territory which can travel around, many people I can talk with in English and nice bulidings soaring up... It is a country for freedom I want to feel. I always want to go there sins I wan very young. Please cross your finger for hope that I can go there. XD

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Hi there [이름]!^^ I will cross both the fingers in my left and right hand and when I see a shooting star I will wish for that too!^^ I think that it\'s a good experience for you!^^ I think that your personality is something that foreigners would like! So go to America and adapt an accent! Good luck!^^ T.Debby^^ PS: Mind you spellings^^ Here are my corrections for you: Hello there Debby :) >> CORRECT OR> Hey Debby^^How was your second weekend of this month? >> CORRECT OR> How did your second weekend of the month go?Is there any special thing you did? >> Is there any special thing that you did?I\'m pretty sure that it was a funny weekned, because the time passed by fast. >> I\'m pretty sure that it was a fun weekned, because the time passed by fast. I want to be staying in my home, but I always try not to think lazy things like that I\'m not going to go exercise. >> I want to be staying in my home, but I always try not to think of lazy things like that I\'m not going to go exercise. It will be happy that there\'s more time during a weekned. >> It will be happy that there\'s more time during a weekend.Let me see you tommorw! >> Let me see you tomorrow!Take care :D>> CORRECT OR> Take lots of care!^^ <Essay>I want to go to Amreica first. >>I want to go to America first. OR> Mt first destination would be America.There\'s big territory which can travel around, many people I can talk with in English and nice bulidings soaring up... >> There\'s a big territory of which we can travel around, many people I can talk with in English and nice bulidings are soaring up... It is a country for freedom I want to feel.  >> It is a country for freedom that I want to feel.  I always want to go there sins I wan very young. >> I\'ve always wanted to go there since I was very young. Please cross your finger for hope that I can go there. XD >>  Please cross your finger for the hope that I can go there. XD

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