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2014-08-12 · 첨삭 강사 Debby

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Hello Debby :) How was your day? The movie that I saw today was really amazing. There's so many enemy troops, 'Japan navy', and not many friendly troops, but the general 'Lee Sunsin' bitted them off. I can't believe it is real history. I think his leadership and virtue led us repel them. He was a really nice general and soldier. If this movie is realsed to Philippine, I recommned for you to go watch it. You won't reget. :D See you. Take care :) <Essay> I think that doing a role as a one of people in society is the best way that we can give back to our communties. We've got so many benefits from our communites. So we need to try to perform as a member of communities.

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Hi there [이름]!^^ I hope that Korean movies could be open for viewing in the Philippines but I think we need a subtitle for that!^^ I hope I can find that in the internet. It would be easier that way!^^ Historical movies are great since it\'s interesting. You don\'t have to open history books to find the information!^^ Great sentences for today and I\'m glad spelling errors are lessened!^^ Have a great day!^^ Take care!^^ T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you today: Hello Debby :) >> CORRECT OR> Hi Debby!^^How was your day? >> CORRECT OR> How did your day go?The movie that I saw today was really amazing. >> CORRECT OR> I saw a really great movie today!^^  There\'s so many enemy troops, \'Japan navy\', and not many friendly troops, but the general \'Lee Sunsin\' bitted them off. >> There are so many enemy troops, \'Japan navy\', and not many friendly troops, but the general \'Lee Sunsin\' bit them off. I can\'t believe it is real history. >> CORRECT OR> I\'m amazed that it is part of our history. I think his leadership and virtue led us repel them. >>  I think his leadership and virtue led us to repel them. He was a really nice general and soldier. >> CORRECT OR> For a soldier and a General, he is very nice.If this movie is realsed to Philippine, I recommned for you to go watch it. >> If this movie is realsed in the Philippines, I recommend you to go watch it. You won\'t reget. :D >> CORRECT OR> You\'ll really have a great time.See you.Take care :)>> Catch you later! Take care!^^<Essay>I think that doing a role as a one of people in society is the best way that we can give back to our communties. >> I think that doing your role as a one of the people in the society is the best way that we can give back to our communties. We\'ve got so many benefits from our communites. >> CORRECT OR> We got a lot of things from our communities too.So we need to try to perform as a member of communities. >> So we need to try to perform as a member of our communities.

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