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2013-01-22 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

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I think true beauty is the mind that love themselves. A person who love themselves, they don't hurt other people and help them truly. I think a trouble between people makes person ill and ugly, but help someone makes more calm and beautiful.

강사 첨삭

    Hello my dear Stella! I strongly agree to your ideas and opinions. As what a famous quote says \"A real beauty is in the eye of the beholder\". I will again call you tomorrow. Keep yourself warm tonight!    -Teacher Alice  I think true beauty is the mind that love themselves. >>I think the real beauty is in the people who love themselves. A person who love themselves, they don\'t hurt other people and help them truly. >>People who love themselves don\'t hurt other people. Hence, they help them truly. I think a trouble between people makes person ill and ugly, but help someone makes more calm and beautiful. >>I think people who are in trouble make them ill and ugly but people who are at peace are beautiful.

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