homework for 1/22
학생이 쓴 원문
If I got a million dollars, first I will give my parents half and I will use another half. I will buy house which in the countryside, and I will make my own big library in my house. I'll buy a tons of books, and saving remainder in my account. In addition, I won't use remainders and I will use only interest of my money!
강사 첨삭
Hi again, Stella!
I have been thinking of winning the lottery many times but I seldom buy lottery tickets. So how will I win? Hahaha!
This is a nice thought though, Stella. SMART IDEA!
Anyway, kindly go over the corrections and let me know if you have questions.
Good night!
~Teacher Alice
If I got a million dollars, first I will give my parents half and I will use another half.
>> If I got a million dollars, first I will give my parents the half and I will use the another half.
I will buy house which in the countryside, and I will make my own big library in my house.
>> I will buy a house in the countryside and I will make my own big library in my house.
I\'ll buy a tons of books, and saving remainder in my account.
>> I\'ll buy a tons of books and save the remainder in my account.
>> OR: I\'ll buy a tons of books and save the rest of my money in my bank account.
In addition, I won\'t use remainders and I will use only interest of my money!
>> In addition, I won\'t use the remainders and I will use only the interest of my money!
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