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2013-01-23 · 첨삭 강사 Alice

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If I got a million dollars, first I will give my parents half and I will use another half. I will buy house which in the countryside, and I will make my own big library in my house. I'll buy a tons of books, and saving remainder in my account. In addition, I won't use remainders and I will use only interest of my money!

강사 첨삭

Hi again, Stella! I have been thinking of winning the lottery many times but I seldom buy lottery tickets. So how will I win? Hahaha! This is a nice thought though, Stella. SMART IDEA!  Anyway, kindly go over the corrections and let me know if you have questions. Good night! ~Teacher Alice If I got a million dollars, first I will give my parents half and I will use another half. >> If I got a million dollars, first I will give my parents the half and I will use the another half. I will buy house which in the countryside, and I will make my own big library in my house. >> I will buy a house in the countryside and I will make my own big library in my house. I\'ll buy a tons of books, and saving remainder in my account. >> I\'ll buy a tons of books and save the remainder in my account. >> OR: I\'ll buy a tons of books and save the rest of my money in my bank account. In addition, I won\'t use remainders and I will use only interest of my money! >> In addition, I won\'t use the remainders and I will use only the interest of my money!

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