Homework for 1/25
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HOMEWORK FOR 01/25:
Writing Task: Which actor would you like to change places with and why?
Well i haven’t think about it before, but if i have a chance to change place with some actor , it seems she is a Emma Watson.
Because i think she is so attractive in her movies and her life both . Specially her speech for Woman in UN was impressive.
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HOMEWORK FOR 01/25:
Writing Task: Which actor would you like to change places with and why?
Well i haven’t think about it before, but if i have a chance to change place with some actor , it seems she is a Emma Watson.
Writing Task: Which actor would you like to change places with and why?
Well i haven’t think about it before, but if i have a chance to change place with some actor , it seems she is a Emma Watson.
>> Well i haven’t think about it before, but if I ever get the chance to switch places with an actor, it would be Emma Watson.
Because i think she is so attractive in her movies and her life both .
Because i think she is so attractive in her movies and her life both .
>> Since she seems so beautiful in both her personal life and in her movies.
Specially her speech for Woman in UN was impressive.
>> Her speech for Women in the UN was particularly impressive.
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