Homework for 2022.05.17
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Q:What kind of stories do you usually post on your Instagram account?
I actually don\'t use my instagram to post pictures. I only use the fuction named \"story\", i just post my life pictures and some good memories. I use story like a diary. Although I don\'t post some pictures, i will post pictures of \"Snoopy\" or my life pictures If I use my instagram to post pictures..
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Hi, Hannah!
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I actually don\'t use my instagram to post pictures.
>> I actually don\'t post my pictures on Instagram.
I only use the fuction named \"story\", i just post my life pictures and some good memories.
>> I only upload life pictures and some good moments on \"story\", a function in Instagram.
I use story like a diary.
>> CORRECT
Although I don\'t post some pictures, i will post pictures of \"Snoopy\" or my life pictures If I use my instagram to post pictures.
>> Although I don\'t post my pictures, I often upload pictures of snoopy or my routine on Instagram.
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