homework for 20th, may

2015-05-20 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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(I actually can't get what exactly the question means. As i understand it, What kids can do for motivating their parents in becoming of which type of parents they want? Am i right? I'll write answers on assumption that i understood correctly.) There is very little possibilities kids can do for motivating adults in the way of kids want. Because they have already lived like that way for decades, which means it's near impossible to change them anyhow. For kids, the changes for everything are not problem since they are open-minded. I can assure kids can't change or motivate for nothing. I can say it for sure, since I was one of those kids who eagerly wanted to change my daddy. If their parents try to pay attention to their kid's opinions, kids might motivate them a little as exceptions.

강사 첨삭

Hi there my dear [이름], happy Wednesday!

I am so happy to finally read your homework on our composition site.^^

By the way, I am so sorry for the question but yes, you understood it correctly.

I agree with your opinion. :) There are only a few chances where kids can help adults in such way.

I appreciate your time and effort in doing your homework my dear.

You are a very good student. Always bear that in mind.

Take care always and have a great day...

xoxoTeacher Cam^^

(I actually can\'t get what exactly the question means.

>>correct

OR: I don\'t exactly understand what the question means.

As i understand it, What kids can do for motivating their parents in becoming of which type of parents they want?

>>correct

Am i right? I\'ll write answers on assumption that i understood correctly.)
>>correct
There is very little possibilities kids can do for motivating adults in the way of kids want.

>>There is a very few possibilities kids can do to motivate adults the ways kids want.

Because they have already lived like that way for decades, which means it\'s near impossible to change them anyhow.

>>Because they have already lived like that way for decades, which means it\'s nearly impossible to change them anyhow.

For kids, the changes for everything are not problem since they are open-minded.

>>For kids, changing everything is not a problem since they are open-minded.

I can assure kids can\'t change or motivate for nothing.

>>correct

I can say it for sure, since I was one of those kids who eagerly wanted to change my daddy.

>>correct

If their parents try to pay attention to their kid\'s opinions, kids might motivate them a little as exceptions.

>>correct

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